Hold my Hand

the line at the top is from a song I wrote, and i'm not finished with it but here is some of it:

Tumbling and turning through the darkened space
It's like the world is on and endless chase
And all i see, is your broken face,
And i won't stop till you get through,
Out of the blue,

chorus
It's the message of Life
The way to the Light
Don't know where to go...
So hold,
My hand,
Through the night,
Just feels,
Like it's right.
end chorus


Well, that's all I got. Tell me what you think!!!

Oh, and Critiques are very welcome!